Flamingos Year 5 Class Blog

 We have been leaning to use modal verbs for persuasion.

You should visit this green jewel of an island. It has soft pearl sand framing it all around. You might even want to have a paddle in the admiral sea underneath the beauty of the sun set after having a long day exploring.

You need to be prepared for the funky gibbons entertaining you every day and making you laugh by dancing around on the emerald vines. Whilst here you must keep you eyes peeled for red bananas and bendy palm trees with coconuts full of refreshing milk.

You must not go anywhere near Kensuke’s cave! It is dark, gloomy and full of spiders. Cobwebs are hanging everywhere, so you wouldn’t want to get stuck in them as they are super sticky.

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasive writing.

You must come and visit this unique, glorious island belonging to Kensuke. This beautiful island is framed by pure, silky white sand that you need to come and let your feet sink into as you walk along the lovely beach. If you bring food you ought to keep it near in case the inquisitive and cheeky baby orangutans pay a visit to your food basket. You should come and search for the sneaky, baby gibbons and orangutans, and watch them play in their natural habitat ,instead of being locked up.

You might want to paddle in the cool shimmering ocean and feel the waves lap at your feet. If you’re feeling adventurous , you could come and investigate Kensuke’s gloomy cave. You may want to go into the lush tropical forest and search for the rare mouth watering , juicy and sweet red bananas or climb palm trees and find the tasty coconuts.

You ought to hike up, the watch hill and you shall see the wonders of the island from up high. You can enjoy all of these things at Kensuke’s Magical Island.

We have been learning to use modal verbs in our writing.

You must come and visit this island framed by soft, powdery sand. You must dip your toes into the glimmering, sky-blue sea. You need to come to the emerald-green forest, keep you eyes peeled for the rare red banana’s because of their luxurious flavour. You should come on a hunt to find brown coconuts that are lurking in the bendy palm trees, will you go into the forest and watch the funky gibbons and orang-utans swinging themselves around the bendy trees! Be adventurous by taking a visit to the south cave. You should look at the mountain at north because of the amazing panoramic view, but beware not to go near Kensuke’s cave because of what lurks behind the thick blackness.
You must visit Kensuke’s Kingdom for the experience of a lifetime.

We are learning to use modal verbs in persuasion.

You must come and see Kensuke’s cave because it is very dark, gloomy and scary. If you say something it echoes. You have to come and see the blue sea, it has lots of fish. You shall come and see this glittering warm sand, lots of people are there and lots of people will be swimming in and out. You ought come and see these red bananas, you will be amazed because they are so delicious. Have a look at the people swimming in and out the massive waves. Come and drink the lovely coconut milk. I can smell the salty water. I can see the waves dashing on the super soft sand. Come to Kensuke’s Marvellous Kingdom

I nervously ran in the gloomy forest, I felt something slithering across my shoes. The leaves crunched under my shoes. Suddenly I was in the pitch black of the forest. Then I went down a ditch where it was darker. All of the sudden I heard something, I looked around but I did not see anything, slowly I carried on nervously running into the forest. Out of the corner of my eye a hole appeared next to me, I was worried, it was foggy in the hole. I stopped and looked where I should go, when I stopped I took a breath and I carried on running. Without warning I tripped over on to the silky mud – I don’t have anyone with me to help me .

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion

Once you arrive at this phenomenal island you ought to pause and take a good glimpse of the lovely Kensuke’s island! The powder white sand frames the island like a curled diamond ribbon. You must dip your toes in the navy blue sea, under the blazing sun. Be sure to look out for those funky gibbons and juicy red bananas exclusively on this island!

We highly recommend that you should not go in the cursed Kensuke’s cave. Inside the cave it is believed that is were Kensuke’s spirit lives. Legends say that he will be livid if you enter his cave… He will haunt you. This cave belongs to Kensuke and Kensuke only.

You just have to open your eyes and keep them peeled for those scrumptious blossom red bananas and milky coconuts everyone who has visited this island say that they are the juiciest and sweetest bananas also milkiest coconuts they have ever tasted. This is a must go paradise island!

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion.

You must visit the all-new Kensuke’s Kingdom with pearl-white sand that glistens in the sun, an Artic light-blue sea full of wonder and mystery and olive palm trees taller than you’ve  ever seen.  You must take a dip in the navy blue ocean but beware of the funky gibbons, they might steal your clothes .

You ought to explore the olive green trees full of orangutans and coconuts, beyond the horizon the cinder sun rises above the enchanted cave full of wonder and mystery.

Down south you need to see the extraordinary view on top of Watch Hill littered with brightly coloured leaves and brown muddy sticks, with a red hot fire down below to keep you warm .You must not travel west for the dangers that lurk there. Come and visit now for only £12.99.

We have been learning to use strategies to build suspense in writing.

I didn’t know where I was. All I knew was that I was being followed by the mist. I knew I had to run from a mysterious figure. It was a phantom. It was every where. The branches were like haunted arms ready to tangle me. I trudged into the gateway to Hell. In the darkness of this spooky forest it was ice cold and a nightmare…

We have been learning to use Modal Verbs for persuasion.

After arriving at the warm , relaxing island you ought to pause for a moment and glimpse at the azure ocean. Be sure to take a dip in this lovely refreshing ocean. You will have the adventure of a life time.

I recommend you shouldn’t go near Kensuke’s cave, for the cave drawings are sure to be cursed. Be careful of Kensuke’s phantom spirit that haunts this cave. If you do go in, you will be killed!

In the centre of the wonderful island is a rainforest with funky gibbons and a giant orangutan. You must go and see them up close! Keep your eyes peeled for the red bananas in the bendy palm trees.

On the chiffon white sand where the shells lay, a shipwreck is buried in the sand, you must visit. Here you will be able to imagine you are a real pirate. You might even wish you were marooned upon the seven seas. It is even believed that Kensuke himself owned this shipwreck.

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion

You have to come to the great Kensuke’s island. You ought to. Whilst you’re driving through take a huge look at the beautiful, shimmering Artic Ocean. You must set your toes on the white silky sand. You might even want to step a foot in the scary and gloomy cave if you’re a explorer.

You need to go to the luscious forest. There are emerald trees which are beautiful to gaze at. Visit the animals like the funky gibbons ; the swinging orangutans and the squawking parrots. You could be eating red bananas – they’re sweeter than usual. You have to drink the yummy coconuts which are falling from palm trees. You can see the gibbons in their natural habits.

On the island there are wonderful mountains you could discover and explore. Come and be prepared for rocky and exciting experience. You must come to the one and only great Kensuke’s Kingdom.