modal verbs

We have been learning to use modal verbs in our writing.

You must come and visit this island framed by soft, powdery sand. You must dip your toes into the glimmering, sky-blue sea. You need to come to the emerald-green forest, keep you eyes peeled for the rare red banana’s because of their luxurious flavour. You should come on a hunt to find brown coconuts that are lurking in the bendy palm trees, will you go into the forest and watch the funky gibbons and orang-utans swinging themselves around the bendy trees! Be adventurous by taking a visit to the south cave. You should look at the mountain at north because of the amazing panoramic view, but beware not to go near Kensuke’s cave because of what lurks behind the thick blackness.
You must visit Kensuke’s Kingdom for the experience of a lifetime.

 

 

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2 Responses to modal verbs

  1. 11cr17 says:

    If I was to write this again I would probably change the Modal Verbs to a dark blue colour and style to a handwriting font 11cr17

  2. 11ns26 says:

    + Good description and use of adjectives.
    + Nice use of vocabulary.
    * You have forgotten to bold some of your ‘modal verbs.’

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