We have been learning to use Modal verbs for persuasion
You must visit the great island of Kensuke’s Kingdom. The North of Kensuke’s island is where Kensuke’s Cave is located you need to explore around inside. On the West there is a shimmering silky cobalt sea you might even want to take a dip or at least paddle along the shore. Don’t forget to watch out for those cunning, funky gibbons and orangutans. You should look out for some crimson bananas, because you won’t find these bananas any where else except here. You may even want to visit the shipwreck burrowed down under the broad white sand down at the south of the island. Let your imagination run wild, you might even want to pretend that you’re a pirate on-board the mega shipwreck. There also might be some very interesting facts and artefacts laying around.
Next time I would improve it by adding more better fronted adverbials better than Kensuke’s Kingdom and Island.
I like it about the crimson bananas. I also think the great kensuke’s kingdom. The burrowed is quite impressive. Imagination is good word.