Flamingos Year 5 Class Blog

We have been learning to use modal verbs persuasion.

You should come to Kensuke’s kingdom. So you need to come and visit. It’s fun!

You must come and swim in the teal blue sea. It’s just the right warmth for your kids and you. It’s beautiful!

The forest is emerald-green. You have to go into the forest, because you can find cherry red bananas in the tree tops. If you need a drink go to a palm tree, grab a delicious coconut and drink the milk out of it.

The sand is creamy like Cornish ice cream, so make sure to go there. You need to go there.

Did you know that there are funky gibbons and orang-utans? Don’t let the funky gibbons steal your clothes so keep them safe…

We were learning to pick up suspense writing because we made are sentences to long .

I didn’t know where I was. I didn’t know how I got there. Or how I was  going to get out. All I knew I was lost. I looked around, it was so dark that I couldn’t see my out-stretched hand in front of me, but I could  smell the musty damp wood of the trees towering over me like prison guards. It appeared as though I was  in a forest but something told me it wasn’t  a friendly place to be. Silently something slithered past my legs, I was terrified. My heart pounded in my chest, I tried to stay as still as possible until I was certain that it was gone and I was safe. I began to run over the leaf-littered floor, trampling bugs  as I went . Stumbling  over  fallen  tree limbs , I could hear the faint whispering screams from long ago from the trees as their  branches had been torn  from there trunks.What happened  here?

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion

You should visit  this tropical island Kensuke Kingdom .It has soft pearl sand all around. You have to come and see the glistening blue sea. Also you can see the beauty of this amazing land on the mountain. There is a magnificent view from the tallest mountain.

You have to taste the juicy red bananas, they’re sweeter than any other bananas. You might want to see the luscious and beautiful rainforest. You need to be prepared for the funky and mischievous  gibbons entertaining you every day by making you laugh by dancing. While you’re here you must keep your eyes  peeled for other creatures including the wildlife. Also the bendy palm trees that give you shade with lots of tasty milk.

You mustn’t go any where near Kensuke’s cave, because its full of spiders and white cobwebs. It’s pitch black and gloomy and lots of bats. You wouldn’t want to get stuck in sticky slime. Don’t forget the howling at night. Don’t go to Kensuke’s cave!

Visit Kensuke’s Kingdom now!!!

We  have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion .

You must come and see Kensuke’s cave, it is gloomy, spooky and dark.

You shall go to see the magnificent red bananas, they’re amazing – you can find bendy  palm trees to climb, so that you can get coconuts.

You have to see the pearl white sand, it is super soft. The sea is warm, so you have to dip your feet in. Keep your clothes in a safe place.

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion.

You must visit the tropical island of Kensuke’s kingdom. Tourists ought to take a look at the glistening, sapphire blue ocean. Swimmers should take a dip in the perfect water and take a look at the tropical fish. Be careful not to leave your clothes on the side because the sneaky orangutan might steal them.

Beyond the shimmering sands you will find the luscious shamrock forest which extends for miles. Keep your eyes peeled for rare red bananas you need to taste them because they are juicer than normal ones and as sweet as candy. You have to look at the funky gibbons they live in their natural habitat.

Try to avoid going up North, because there will be a gloomy cave there – some creatures  live there, like bats, owls and spiders.

Take a slow stroll up Watch Hill. You must visit it. It’s littered with dry leaves  and twigs. You might want to build a fire at the top to keep you warm. At this vantage point you will see the amazing panoramic view of the island. Be sure to go there at sun set so you see the sun dip over the horizon.

We have been learning to use modal verb for persuasion.

You ought to visit the tropical island of Kensuke’s Kingdom. The island is framed by smooth, snow white sands. Whilst you are on this vacation, you certainly must avoid the cave that is located at the Northern end of the island as it is gloomy and frightening to see.

Along the way you must at least dip feet in the lapis blue ocean because it is cool and tingly. On your visit you must keep your eyes peeled for scarlet red bananas as they are juicier and much more sweeter than the ones we know.

After the Sun sets you better look out for insects. They could be vicious. As you wake up, need to see the amazing  and majestic sunrise at the peak of watch hill. As it is a once in a life-time occasion!

Please keep your valuables in a safe spot, other wise the cheeky orangutans or the funky gibbons will get them.

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion

You ought to visit this wonderful island full of lovely mint green vegetation and brilliant pearl white framed golden sand. You mustn’t step onto the scary Northern side of the island you should go to the jet black cave, it belongs to Kensuke. Why not have a break have a crimson red banana yum or a creamy white relaxing coconut drink. With warm temperatures there is no rain. It is impossible to resist this luxurious island, you need to come along. Deep in the forest there are humongous palm trees you have to come the palm trees  create a canopy from above. There are lush red bananas on the trees along with coconuts. You are guaranteed to have a fabulous time and have a break from noise. You will also see funky gibbons in their breathe taking view when the sun sets.

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion writing

You might want to go to the emerald green forest when your deep in you ought to look at the funky gibbons and keep your eyes peeled to look for the fresh milk in the coconuts hanging on top of the branches and the red bananas. Remember get them quickly before the funky gibbons get them.

You should go and visit the pitch black cave and explore their paintings they are the same colours of the forest. Be careful, you mustn’t go far because bats will come swooping at you  really fast.

You could go to the creamy soft sand and build lots of things, like a sand castle to keep you busy. So you don’t have to walk around all the time , and you won’t be bored.

We have been leaning suspense in our writing.

I was walking through a misty forest. I heard a loud noise. My heart pounded. All of a sudden leaves fell from the trees above me. A smell of damp moss lingered in the damp dirty air. Nervously I took one more step ahead. All of a sudden, something slithered across my feet, I stood still and screamed. Something shuddered as I closed my mouth. What was it? I don’t know…

We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion.

You must approach this island because you might want to visit the beautiful pale blue Ocean. Wouldn’t you like to dip your toes in the shimmering chilly ocean?

Do you want to visit a different place now. Let’s go to the dark, gloomy and scary cave. You must come in, when you go deeper it gets scarier – you may go now but I wanted to show you.

We are visiting the last place now. Do you want to know where we are going? To the forest, you shouldn’t miss this because there are delicious coconuts. We need to get food or drink, we might survive, we might not.