We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion.
You must visit the all-new Kensuke’s Kingdom with pearl-white sand that glistens in the sun, an Artic light-blue sea full of wonder and mystery and olive palm trees taller than you’ve ever seen. You must take a dip in the navy blue ocean but beware of the funky gibbons, they might steal your clothes .
You ought to explore the olive green trees full of orangutans and coconuts, beyond the horizon the cinder sun rises above the enchanted cave full of wonder and mystery.
Down south you need to see the extraordinary view on top of Watch Hill littered with brightly coloured leaves and brown muddy sticks, with a red hot fire down below to keep you warm .You must not travel west for the dangers that lurk there. Come and visit now for only £12.99.
I found it really interesting how you separated all your paragraphs.
I also found it very interesting especially the part come and visit now for only £12.99.
I think you could improve the way you have put your writing so that it is not in the centre because only poems are in the centre.