Category Archives: Pupil Work 2017-18

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10th October recount

We have been learning to write a recount 10th October 2016 August 10 Today we visited sunny Spain to sunbathe on one of their golden, sandy beaches. Before we got there I saw: jelly-fish, dolphins, turtles and a shark off … Continue reading

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12th September. Setting description

In the distance, he could still hear the birds’ eerie whistle. Finger-like vines lurked in the ebony abyss reaching out to grab him. Mossy damp walls surrounded the approach. He could still hear the slowly crashing water, taking a big … Continue reading

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Kensuke’s Kingdom – Character Description

He was diminutive, no taller  than me, and a old a man as I had ever seen. He wore nothing but a pair of tattered breeches bunched at the waist, and there was a large knife in his belt. He … Continue reading

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12 September – Setting Description.

We have been learning about writing setting descriptions. As he peers his way through the temple, the vines scratched at his neck and constricted around his shoulders, not letting go as he tried to break free. Ravens cackled and screeched, … Continue reading

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12th September. setting description

We have been learning to write a setting description Darkness closes in whilst the lush vegetation layers the entrance to the gloomy temple. Shards of light reach the floor and the humid air surrounds the explorer. Inside the temple, the walls … Continue reading

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10th October. pgl recount

We have been learning to write a recount October 10th 2016 October 1st Today was the first day of our activities, our group did was archery. I got gold on my 1st try! Miss Downey somehow missed every shot. During lunch … Continue reading

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12th September setting description

We have been learning to write a setting description. September 12th 2016  As he trembled, the nervous guide, observed his surroundings. Above him, he could see canopy of vines fighting to keep the sunlight out, but this was clearly a … Continue reading

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14th October 2016 short story.

We have been learning how to write a short story. 14th October 2016 Bleary eyed, and with the taste of salt still in my throat, I sat up and scanned the beach. A crescent shaped moon glared through the transparent, wispy … Continue reading

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12th September. Setting description

We have been learning to write a setting description. Shards of light pierced through the night sky jungle . Khaki , overgrown coloured vines  obscured the ancient, prehistoric temple. In the near distance , cerulean water cascaded over the jagged edge … Continue reading

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10th October: Recount

We have been learning to write a recount. March 16th It was far from over, although I had a feeling that deep down, my next victim was close. As I was spinning the wheel from my last accident, I faintly heard … Continue reading

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