We have been learning to write a recount.
March 16th
It was far from over, although I had a feeling that deep down, my next victim was close. As I was spinning the wheel from my last accident, I faintly heard clattering of another engine. A car came past with an apprehensive man sitting inside, he asked me if I wanted a lift. Despite the fact that the man was cautious, I jumped in anyway. This random man just wouldn’t stop asking me questions. Would he ever shut up? As I checked my watch there were two minutes left. The stupid guy just stared into my opaque goggles and saw the crash, and then he crashed.
Yet again I was waiting as another car approached…
I liked the descriptive adjectives for example “opaque goggles” it gave a insight on the ride.
I also liked the insight on thoughts for example “would he ever shut up?”
* Next time, try to describe the surroundings by using descriptive adjectives to give an insight on the area around the character.