10th October. pgl recount

Posted on 16th November 2016 by 10al19

We have been learning to write a recount

October 10th 2016

October 1st

Today was the first day of our activities, our group did was archery. I got gold on my 1st try! Miss Downey somehow missed every shot. During lunch I was so greedy, I ate so much food. Later that day we played ambush, I was so excited. I was part of Joe’s team (the cool team obviously) and we cheated so that we won.

 

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1 Response to 10th October. pgl recount

  1. 10ma24 says:
    17th November 2016 at 2:57 pm

    I liked this piece because you have used sentence starters.

    I liked this piece of work because you have used brackets.

    * Next time try to expand on your work and try harder to write more.

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