We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion writing
You might want to go to the emerald green forest when your deep in you ought to look at the funky gibbons and keep your eyes peeled to look for the fresh milk in the coconuts hanging on top of the branches and the red bananas. Remember get them quickly before the funky gibbons get them.
You should go and visit the pitch black cave and explore their paintings they are the same colours of the forest. Be careful, you mustn’t go far because bats will come swooping at you really fast.
You could go to the creamy soft sand and build lots of things, like a sand castle to keep you busy. So you don’t have to walk around all the time , and you won’t be bored.
If I wrote this again I would change the colour of my modal verbs so it stand out.
I like your modal verbs and like the way you made them big and bold.
I could see them clearly which meant I could see where you put them in your writing.
next time I think you could improve on sentence starters because you have used you quiet a lot of the time in your sentences