We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion
You ought to stop and visit Kensuke’s Kingdom on your tour of the Coral Sea. The island is surrounded by a sapphire sea, shimmering in the sun, it has an emerald core framed by pearly white sand. You can visit the forest to see the funky gibbons in their natural habitat, make sure to keep your eyes peeled for the scarlet, red bananas which are sweeter than normal, only found in Kensuke’s Kingdom.
Visit the obscure cave and find undiscovered artefacts and fossils but sometimes you might discover new and unexplainable things. Make sure that you swim in the ocean, or you might climb the tall mountains and see everything from above! Visit Kensuke’s Kingdom now!
+ I am proud on the fact that I have correctly inserted capital letters and punctuation.
+ I think I have done very well on my description.
+ If I were to do this again I would add more modal verbs.
you have used modal verbs to persuade me and I think its great.
you have used amazing describing words and it felt like I was there.
you could improve on using the same sentence starters.