We have been learning to use modal verbs for persuasion.
You must come and visit the all new Kensuke’s Kingdom. There is lots of things to see
In the middle there are some scarlet red bananas. They are so juicy. If you want to find them they are in the dark forest . They’re freshly picked. You must not go to the cave because of the bats. Remember to bring a torch to go in the cave because it is pitch black in there.
You need to make a camp for your own. You will find wood for warmth to go to bed. Enjoy your adventure on Kensuke’s kingdom. Watch the beautiful sun set.
Next time I could use more Modal Verbs because I only used 4 Modal Verbs.
I’m exited to be doing more blogs because there fun and ICT is so fun so I would like to do more on J2e.
1.Pagan I loved where you said scarlet red bananas. Amazing!
2.I liked how the bananas where freshly picked. Excellent!
3.Next time you could improve your paragraph because on your first one you did one line