We have been learning to write a setting description.
With his shoes making a squidgy sound he approached the concealed opening to the temple. The fingers of vines where like snakes guarding the entrance the distance birds screeched in pain taking a deep breath, he nervously yet excitedly steeped in to the temple. The walls were covered in sticky cobwebs which glistened like stars and stuck to his cloths like super glue. Walking through the cave not finding anything tired and frustrated he started to think that maybe there was nothing there and he started to wonder if he should just turn back. Turning the corner, he couldn’t believe that he had finally found the idol.
I like the phrase “sticky cobwebs glistening like stars” because it’s very descriptive and paints a picture in my head.
I also like the phrase “tired and frustrated” because it tells me vividly that he feels those words.
Next time, you might want to check for spelling mistakes.