Amazing work Lewis! You have thought really hard about your metaphor and drip fed it the entire way through your poem. Definitely the best piece of writing you have ever done!
Can anyone tell me what Lewis’ metaphor of the arrow and the targets represents? You can comment below if you think you know the answer, or just leave Lewis a lovely comment about how fab you think his work is!
Miss Downey
Lewis,
This is one if the best metaphorical poems I have read in a long time. Very moving, great use of language and so many ideas that relate to the arrow metaphor. You should be very proud of yourself for writing a poem of such quality.
Mr Johnson
Amazing work Lewis! You have thought really hard about your metaphor and drip fed it the entire way through your poem. Definitely the best piece of writing you have ever done!
Can anyone tell me what Lewis’ metaphor of the arrow and the targets represents? You can comment below if you think you know the answer, or just leave Lewis a lovely comment about how fab you think his work is!
Miss Downey
Lewis,
This is one if the best metaphorical poems I have read in a long time. Very moving, great use of language and so many ideas that relate to the arrow metaphor. You should be very proud of yourself for writing a poem of such quality.
Mr Johnson
This is wonderful Lewis!! I am so impressed.
Mrs Godfrey.